12-08-2024, 01:50 AM
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(11-08-2024, 09:13 PM)Pentagon Wrote: achhi beginning....lag raha hai ki story fast chal rahi hai, keep it a bit slow
Thank you for liking the story but as I have already told through the first post, story already likhi hui hai, this time main bas thoda improvise kar raha hai, story completely change nhi karunga... Baaki readers agar kuch accha suggest karenge to include karne ka try karunga.