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Fantasy MERI JINDAGI(FANTASY+MAGIC+THRILLER)
#22
Update 7

Itna bol mea uski pit par beth gaya or wo rakha teji se doudne lagga.

Or kuch hi der doudne ke baad wo ruka or mujse bola .

B rakha - Yaha se tumhe akele he jana hoga..

Issi disha mea kuch dur chalne par tumhe us mayavi chudail ka ashiyana dikhayi dega..


Uske tk piche he wo talab he jaha wo khanjar laga hua hea..

Rakha ki baat sun mene usse ek baar or dhanyawad kaha fir uss disha mea chalne lagga..

Ab aage..

Mea jaise aage badda samne ka najara dekh mea chaunk gaya tha??

Qki mere saamne us chudail ka thikana tha..

Saala aisa lagra tha bhuto ka adda ho wo..

Pure jungle me hare bare ped the par ye salla pura ped he kalla tha or size me b itna bada tha ki kya batau..

Ye sayad bargad ka ped tha..

Ped se lambi lambi tehnia latak rahi thi wo b kali kali..

Ek bar toa mea b thoda gabra gaya tha ye najara dekh..

Par fir b khud par control kar mea aage bada..

Or jaise he me us ped ke taraf apna kadam badaya ..

Ek jor ke jatke ke sath mea piche udta hua gaya..

Or tik piche ek ped se takraya..

Jatka itna jor se tha ki jis ped se mea takraya wo ped aadha tut gaya tha...

Abi mea thoda sambal he tha ki mere saamne wale kale ped se jade mere taraf aane lagi or mere hath per jakad liyea usnea..

Ab mea hava mea zul raha tha..

Mea is waqt hava mea X ki taraha latak raha tha..

Par mea kuch kar b ni paa raha tha..


Bohot kosis ki fir b mea apne hath pero ko chuda ni paa raha tha..

Tabi mere saamne kalla duva uthne lagga..

Or pure jungle mea chamakadaro ki awaj aane lagi..

Havaye kafi tej chal rahi thi..

Us ped ke tk upar  bijliya chamak rahi thi..

Kul milkar salla mohol bhutiya hogaya tha..

Tabi vo kalla duva chatne lagga or mere saamne kale kapdo mea ek ladki khadi thi



Uska rup dekh toa mea hang hogaya tha qki mene kabi chudail toa ni dekhi thi par jo socha tha usse toa ye wali bohot he sundar thi sath he ajib b..

Khair mea abi usko gur he raha tha ki wo mere pass aayi or mujse boli..

Chudail - Kon ho tum..


Or yaha aaneke himat kaise huyi tumhari..

Aaryan - Mera naam Aaryan he or mea yaha jaduyi khanjar lene aaya hu..

Meri baate sun wo chudail hasne lagi or boli..

Chudail - bache abi b waqt he challa ja chod dungi tuje mea..

Warna aaj tak jo b yaha aaya he uski lash tak yaha se lautna saki..

Itna bol fir se wo apni daravni hasi hasne lagi..

Aaryan - Chahe kuch b ho jaye mea us khanjar ko yaha se lekar he jaunga..

Or aisa karne se koi b muje ni rok sakta..


Tum b nai..

Mera itna he bolna tha ki us chudail ne apna hath hava me kiya or uske hath me hunter aagaya or wo us hunter se muje marne lagii


.

Par hunter ki mar ka toa mujpar koi asar ni horaha tha..

Qki isse kai guna jadda mene sehen sakti ki training ke waqt dard jela tha...

Kuch der muje marne par b muje kuch na hote dekh usne hunter fir ek barr hava mea gol ghumaya or fir muje marne lagi..

Par isbar hunter se bijliya gir rahi thi..

Muje issea b jadda farak ni pad rahatha par hunter ki maar or bijli ke wajase mera T-shirt fat gaya tha or mere chest par jagga jagga hunter or bijli ke jalne ke nishan hogaye the..

Fir mea bola..

Aaryan - Hath band toa koi b kisse b mar saktay..


Mene toa socha tha zoya chudail bohot taqatwar hogi..

Par tum toa buzdil nikli jo kayaron ke jaise hath pav band muje mar rahi ho..


Dam he toa hath khola fir batata hu tumhe..

Meri batao se uski bohot jali??

Isliye usne mere hath pair aajad kardiye..

Hath pair aazad hote he mea thoda angadayi lete huye usse bola..

Aaryan - Ha ab dekhte he mayavi zoya me kitna dam he...

Itna bol mene apni talwar jo apne pit par lagi hui thi usse bahar nikala or apna stance lea liya..

Mere tayar hote hee..

Zoya ne b apne hunter ko talwar me badal liya or mujpar war karne ke liyea aage badne lagi..

Usne apni talwar se mere sar par war kiya par mene block kar liya..

Fir usne chest par kiya wo b block..

Fir sar par fir block..

Mea uske saare war sirf block he kar raha tha..

Or ek opening milne ka intazar kar raha tha taki mea us par war kar saku par zoya lagatar attack he kare ja rahi thi or mea block..

Par mere pass jadda samay ni tha isliye muje jo b karna tha jaldi karna tha..

Par zoya apne waro ko block hota dekh mujpar energy ball se hamla kiya or mea isske liye tayar ni tha..

Iske wajase energy ball lagte he mea kale ped se ja takraya or us ped ki kuch tahaniya b tut gayi..

Par zoya yaha nai ruki or mujpar lagatar energy balls fekne lagi..

Energy ball lagne ke wajase me kafi gayal hochuka tha..

Zoya mere pass aakar mujse boli..

Zoya - Q itna he dam hea..


Abi toa badi badi batte kar rahe the..

Ab muje gussa ane lagga tha par zoya se head to head fight mea me jit ni sakta tha ..


Or mere pass samay b nai hea..

Ek toa wo amar he upar se chudail b..

Oo yes idea mea apne man me bola or apne hath se ek energy ball banayi or jaise he zoya mere pass aayi uspar fek de..

Ye sab achanak hua tha isliye zoya tayar nai thi..

Or meri energy ball lagte hi wo piche ki taraf gir padi..

Meri energy ball ke wajase waha halka dua sa hogya tha..

Diye mea kuch saaf nai dik raha tha par mere pass a raghav ki di hui sakti thi isliye mea aram se dekh paa raha tha..

Par us zoya ko kuch ni dikh raha tha isi baat ka fayda uthakar meane apna khanjar jo mea apne sath layya tha usse nikala or zoya ke taraf baghaa or uske piche aate he uski choti kaat di apne khanjar..

Choti katte he mea jor se chillaya ..

Aaryan - Ye Yes yes I did it..


Yahoo ..

Itna bol mea uchalne lagga..

Or yaha jo kuch b hua ispar zoya ko yakeen he ni horaha tha..

Zoya dadham se apne ghutno ke bal niche beth gayi..

Or rone lagi..

Par muje ye baat bohot ajeeb lagi par mene uspar kuch khass dyan nai diya..

Or us kale ped ke piche jo talab tha us taraf bagne lagga qki ab mere pass samay kafi kam tha or qki kuch he seconds me suraj ki kirne talab par girne wali he..

Jaise mea talab ke pass pohacha tabi suraj tk us talab ke upar agaya tha or uski kirne talab par girne lagi thi..

Suraj ki kirne talab par girte he saamne jo najara tha dekh mea ussi me kho gaya..

Kya tha aisa jaane ke liye nxt update ka wait kare..

1st attempt tha fighting scene likhne ka ..


Isliye kuch bul hui ho toa maaf karna dosto..


Or kuch suggestion ho taki behtar likh saku toa jarur batayega..

Agla update kal aayega..
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