01-08-2024, 10:25 PM
(This post was last modified: 01-08-2024, 10:26 PM by Hornytamilan23. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
I feel it's time to move the story forward, it got stuck in the same place for sometime now.
Weekly a update is fine bro, can you pickup the pace of the story, because in many cases authors find it difficult to give updates for longer periods of time.
Let her ordeal begin, you can make it more erotic from the next update.
You can slow down when it reaches the point, when people start to think what's next? For now keep the events unfolding at a fast rate.
Weekly a update is fine bro, can you pickup the pace of the story, because in many cases authors find it difficult to give updates for longer periods of time.
Let her ordeal begin, you can make it more erotic from the next update.
You can slow down when it reaches the point, when people start to think what's next? For now keep the events unfolding at a fast rate.
-Pickup, drop, escape.