30-07-2024, 04:26 PM
Great update bro.
It's interesting cuz both chaami and Vishnu know each other's intentions.Can they work together to finally enjoy her.
Or chaami lets Vishnu enjoy her first as a part of deal cuz you write well from third person point of view(here chaami is the one telling what to do during Puja).
Waiting for next update(regular updates are needed).
Suggestion : Don't involve any other characters like harilal and all, they make story all over place.
It's interesting cuz both chaami and Vishnu know each other's intentions.Can they work together to finally enjoy her.
Or chaami lets Vishnu enjoy her first as a part of deal cuz you write well from third person point of view(here chaami is the one telling what to do during Puja).
Waiting for next update(regular updates are needed).
Suggestion : Don't involve any other characters like harilal and all, they make story all over place.