26-07-2024, 10:45 AM
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(26-07-2024, 09:26 AM)Givemeextra Wrote: Dear Adams Masala,
No, Couldn't get it because didn't even read it.
Reason is:
Lost the plot as your quick back to back updates looked like just another in series of sex updates with not much plot.
Looks you are inserting important discussions in-between for few lines.
My mind wishes , appreciate effort taken and Ask's - Have you considered ending the completely sex crazy/plotless/one man sided story or going to continue this misadventure in literature?
Try a new thread Author with different settings/plot. Don't waste your skills this way.
Ok please read the last few chapters, wrote really long updates, thickened the plot, story is getting good direction in the last few chapters. Try to read it from where it ended with Keerthi. Also the last Shruti experience is delicately written from experience if i might add. Anyway, I’m writing it for my own pleasure and I hope other might enjoy it.
See Tharun's action in this story How I fucked a homely girl and a modern slut at work