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Anyone reading this may I know if you were caught off gaurd by switching to the sex scene between Sunita and Jegan without mentioning their names? Did you all notice that? What went through your mind? As an author I'd love to hear what went thorough your mind until you read the whole thing to reveal it was Sunita and Jegan.

Dear Adams Masala,
No, Couldn't get it because didn't even read it.
Reason is: 
Lost the plot as your quick back to back updates looked like just another in series of sex updates with not much plot.
Looks you are inserting important discussions in-between for few lines.


My mind wishes   , appreciate effort taken  clp);  and Ask's  -    Have you considered ending the completely sex crazy/plotless/one man sided story or going to continue this misadventure in literature?

Try a new thread Author with different settings/plot. Don't waste your skills this way.