23-07-2024, 08:08 AM
(22-07-2024, 04:16 PM)Hukumm....!!! Wrote: Update 4….
Chalo kahani ab Tak Hui us waise hi rahane do..
Ab aage….
Arey yaar chalna deri ho rahi he aur ye bakwas kahani kitne waqt Tak padta rahega ..
((( Kahani Mumbai ke ek high society ki he)))..
Vimal …
34 saal ka ek handsome man he .. shaadishuda aur ek bacha he uska…
Vimal… sun Bhai Ghar me khane ke liye kuch nhi mil Raha he na tho bahar khaa Lena chahiye .. waise bhi Teri bhabhi he na ek chudail he ..
Mujhe pass nhi bulati aur bahar nhi khane deti..
Isliye aise gande site Pe kahani padtaoon..
Kamal…
((Vimal ka chota Bhai.. 32 saal ka he shaadi ho gayi..))
Abey gaandu thu ek number ka kutta he ye baat bhabhi ko pata chala na Tera khair nhi..
Acha ye bata kya story padh Raha tha..
Kamal laptop me dekh Raha tha..
Tabhi vimal laptop band karte hue..
Vimal… rahne de chal Ghar chalte he bahut waqt ho Gaya he…
Kamal… acha thik he me parking slot me wait kartoon thu aaja..
Kamal waha se chale Gaya..
Vimal… saala Bach Gaya AJ tho..
Uff ab Ghar jaake wo chudail se daat khana padega kya..
oh God…
Vimal bhi parking me aagaya .. dono Bhai car me Ghar ke taraf badhe….
…. Asian colony Mumbai….
Ek aalishan Bangla…
Arey tum itni der Tak kya kar rahe ho khana ab Tak nhi banaya the kya..
Ek jawan aurat chilla rahi apne noukar pe…
Noukar… maaf kijiye choti bahurani bas 15 min me banadaaloonga..
Aurat… kya 15 mins.. 15 mins ..
Peth me chue doudh rahe jaldi banao jaao. Mera shaqal kya dekh rhe ho yaha khade hoke..
Piche se ek aur awaj aati he..
Arey tum bekar me kaka (( noukar )) ko kyun daat rahi ho Tamanna.(( Tamanna aap log sahi padh rahe Tamanna hi he ))
Tamanna…
Ek jawan aurat 27 saal ki garam maal .. ye he Kamal ki biwi..
Piche se aai awaj sunte hi Tamanna piche mudh kar..
Tamanna… Sandhya didi tum ye budde ko kyun support karti ho .. inki aukad nhi he ye gandi naali ke keede he..
Sandhya..
(( Vimal ki biwi .. ek bache ki maa aur 30 saal ki Jaan lewa Bala))
Arey Tamanna thu ye kaise baat karti ho.. pahele Teri sajaht dekh aise ghumti ho kya Ghar me ..
Jaa dress change kar..
Tamanna… didi tum hamesha mujhe hi kyun daat thi ho . Uff Mai Jaa rahioon .
Tamanna apni paaw patakte hue bedroom me ghus gayi…
Sandhya…
Uff ye ladki bhi na bilkul choti bachi jaise harkat kar Rahi hmm..
Sandhya ne kitchen me aagayi.. noukar ko bulate hue..
Sandhya… Ahmad kaka suniye..
Ahmad(( 65 saal ka budda , dubla aur patla , safed Baal aur kala rang ka jism ))
Ahmad… ji badi bahurani boliye ..
Sandhya… wo tum Tamanna ke baat se bura mat maano.. uski Dil choti bachi jaisa he..
Ahmad… arey badi bahurani hum kyku bura manega.. wo meri beti jaisi he ..
Acha mujhe apni kaam niptaane do ..
Sandhya muskurate hue.. ha kaka thik he apna kaam karlo me chaltioon..
Ahmad… ji..
Sandhya hall me pahunch jaati .. tabhi calling bell ki awaj sunayi di..
Iss bich me..
Vimal aur Kamal Ghar pahunch Gaye…
Kamal jor se car horn Baja Raha…
Watchman jald se jald gate open Kiya..
Kamal car window se dekhte puch Raha..
Kamal.. ramsingh kaka kaha Gaye gate open karne itni deri kyun lagi..
Ramsingh..(( 60 saal ka budda, kaala aur hattakatta admi ))
Arey Kamal beta wo me apni gharwaali se baat kar raha tha eediiio caal me…
Kamal haste hue..
Kaka eediiio nhi video bolte he video .. acha chalo koi baat nhi .. car andar aagayi .
Ramsingh gate se bahar aakar road ki taraf udar idar dekh ke gate close kar Diya..
Vimal aur Kamal car se niche utar Gaye..
Kamal apni bag lekar main door taraf Jaa Raha..
Vimal… arey Kamal Rukh jara..
Kamal… uff bol kya he..
Vimal… arey itna irritate kyun hota re thu jara mere muh se wiskey ki smell aarahi he kya dekh .. ufffuuuuuuu..
Kamal… Abey hatt bewakuf kahike mujhe ulti ho rahi . Kya peekar aaya bey thu..
Vimal… arey thoda wiskey aur kuch nhi .
Kamal… AJ khair nhi Teri Hitler ke haat me..
Vimal… arey thu kyku Daratha he .. gaand fat jayegi meri Rukh ..
Vimal apni pocket se mouth freshener lekar muh me daal kar chaab raha..
Kamal… chal thu sudharega nhi ..
Kamal calling bell bajata he..
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Aarahioon sabar Karo na.. Sandhya chillate hue door open ki..
Kamal.. apni bag khande pe adjust karte hue..
Gd evng bhabhi ji how was the day..
Sandhya… yeah gd wt ABT u..
Kamal.. perfect . Ok Mai fresh hokar aataaoon .. ha waise bhi Tamanna Ghar aagayi thi na..
Sandhya… ha tumhari bedroom me he thu Jaa .. ye kahate vimal ke taraf ghur Rahi..
Vimal ne Sandhya ke taraf dekha .. dekhte hi uski fat gayi..
Vimal (( Mann me))... Saala ye chudail hi kholna kya darwaja . Ye kahate Kamal ke piche piche Ghar me ghus gaya..
Sandhya vimal ko ghur Rahi..
Vimal apna sar niche karke sidha apni room me ghus gaya..
Sandhya main door close karke bedroom taraf gayi..
Andar room me vimal apne ladle se khel Raha..
Vimal… oye mere prince kya kar Raha he thu. Ille lle.
Pappu 3 saal Umar ka he Sandhya aur vimal ka beta..
Bedroom ke door ke pass Sandhya khadi Hui sab dekh Rahi..
Vimal ne door taraf dekha fir Nazar ghumaya..
Sandhya… drink karke aaye the na tum fir se ..
Vimal… ohh.. mujhe fresh hona he.. ye kahate Bina jawab diye washroom me ghus gaya..
Sandhya jor se chillate boli.. kutte ki akhal he vimal Teri sudharega nhi kabhi bhi..
Dusri taraf room me…
Tamanna phone me reels dekhte hue.. uff fir se shuru ho Gaye dono..
Kamal tujhe Mai kitne baar puchoon hum yaha se dusre jagah pe shift kyun nhi hote..
Kamal.. apni shirt utarte hue.. wait jaldi kya he baby…
Waise bhi AJ tho thu bahut hot lag rahi hai kya baat he batana mujhe bhi..
Tamanna… idiot Jaa yaha se ..
Phone me reels dekhte hue Kamal ko pyaar se daati..
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Ahmad… Sandhya ke bedroom ke pass khada hokar..badi bahurani khana tayaar he parosdoin kya kahate bula Raha..
Sandhya… ha kaka thik he..
Ha aur ek baat watchman aur tumhare liye bhi khana leke jaao..
Ahmad… shukriya bahurani..
Sandhya… koi baat nhi.. ye kahate bedroom se bahar aayi..
Ahmed bhi khana dining table pe rakh kar chale Gaya..
Kuch der baad family members sab bhet kar khana khaa rahe..
Vimal… arey ye kya iss week me dusri baar paneer tikka banaya.. mujhe nhi khana ye sab..
Vimal ki awaj sunte hi Sandhya ghur ke dekhi..
Vimal ne Sandhya ke taraf dekh kar khamosh se khana khaa Raha..
Tamanna aur Kamal ko hasi aagayi..
Kamal… kya hua fat gayi kya Hitler ko dekhte hi bolna kahate vimal ko chid Raha dhire se..
Vimal.. Abey thu chup bey .. wo abhi bhi dekh Rahi he kya mere taraf..
Kamal ek baar Sandhya ki aur dekha..
Sandhya dono ko gusse se dekh Rahi..
Kamal bhi apna sar niche karke khana khaa Raha..
Vimal… Abey bol dekh Rahi ki nhi..
Sandhya… hey kya pus pus kar rahe the dono chup chap khaa nhi sakte kya.. gusse ki awaj me boli…
Vimal… sar jukake khate hue.. kya re Kamal ab Teri fat gayi kya kahate muskuraya..
Kamal… ek din dekhloonga tujhe ..
Sab log khane ke baad apni apni rooms me chale gaye..
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Bahar servant ke room me..
Ahmed… arey ye kya hungama chalta he har din saala pura din behas karte rahate dono biwi Miya..
Ramsingh.. tujhe kyku padhne ka Rey unki jagde se tujhe kya he..
Ahmed… Abey gaandu thu tho kutte jaisa gate ke pass hi pada rahata he .. Ghar ka kaam Mai karta hoon.. ye Sandhya he na har waqt wo vimal ko daat rahi..
Saala wo bhi namard jaisa daat khaa Raha..
Ye kahate Desi daaru pi Raha..
Ramsingh… kya re daaru jyada pigaya kya bahurani se sidha naam leke bula Raha.. wo sunegi na Ghar se bahar nikal degi .
Ahmad… tujhe kyku bey itni jal Rahi.. Teri Bahu he kya nhi na fir kyun gaand me ungli karta meri..
Ramsingh…arey wo nhi Bhai wo log Ameer he hum tho sadak pe jeena bitaane waale.. bekar me lafda kyun bol..
Ahmad… Abey my kyku lafda karoonga .. waise bhi my sadak pe jeena nhi karne waala .. wo dono jawan aurat ki chut chodne waala hoon ek din..
Pura bottle Khali karke room ke kon me phenkdiye..
Ramsingh ko Ahmad ke baat se jor se jatka laga..
Abey kya bol Raha thu .. Jaan se marwana chahata he kya ye kahate Ahmad ko ghur Raha..
Ahmad… arey darta kyku thu.. Ghar me do tikki mirchi ya he ..
Ek chut band padi he kuch mahino se , aur dusri ka mard tho chodega bhi kya wo chote lund se..
Waqt aane par hathoda maar Dena he.. bas thu dekhta Jaa my kya kartoon ..
Ahmad bolte bolte wahi zameen par let gaya..
Ramsingh… kamina ek din jarur gaand marwayega ..
Chal beta apni kaam pe .. ye kahate gate paas chale Gaya..
Achi update hai but story ko kya phir se start hua Aisa lag raha hai lagta hai main plot ab shuru hua hai