22-07-2024, 12:52 PM
(22-07-2024, 12:58 AM)Marishka Wrote: Likhte acche ho. But sentence proper nahi hai.
Sab mix kar dete ho.
Thoda bich bich me space bhi rakho aur spell correction bhi karo.
Aur thoda situation pura discribe karke likho.
Ek do din me hi buddhe ke liye softcore mat banao.
Thoda seduction lao.. Ahmed ko hero banna hai to sandhya ko khub tadpao.. Usi tarah tamanna ko bhi.
Sandhya ka pati usko physical satisfaction naa de sake.. Aur ye baat Ahmed ko pata chale.. Aur usi baat ka wo bharpur fayda uthaye.
Thoda deeply likho.. Tab maja aayega.
Keep it up.. ??
Shukriya Bhai...
Me sambhal leta hoon..
Agle update se pura dhyaan rakh kar story aage badataoon...