Adultery Knowing My Wife, Knowing Me As Well - part III

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I have deleted chapter 41 and 42.  The story will continue from chapter 41 with small changes, and from 42 and 43 onwards, the story will have more changes. At least four chapters will follow. I'm not sure about how many chapters will be there. If I make small chapters it can take up to 8 chapters as well. By small, I mean a chapter which can be told in one post. 
Now the most important but disappointing aspect about it ;) I'm just half way into my rewriting.

Hi Kris,

Thanks for offering to consider a rewrite!

While I was hoping for a happy ending, the rush at the end felt a little off.

Here's what could make it stronger:

•    Deeper Dive into Meera: Explain her actions better. Let her realize she was wrong and understand Krish's love and insecurities.
  
•    Krish's Growth: Have Krish address his own issues and open up to Meera. Maybe he needs to confront his past (his "ghosts").
  
•    Focus on the Bigger Picture: Remind them Desai is just a temporary distraction. They have a future together and a ticking biological clock.
  
•    Honest Communication: I don't want a lecture, but let them talk openly and honestly! Meera running off and back only adds spice without a convincing resolution.
  

Remember, you're a fantastic author! I trust your vision. Just hoping you had time to consider the ending and that any rewrite will stay true to your voice.

Thanks!