30-12-2018, 01:06 PM
(30-12-2018, 12:48 PM)DR.DINGDONGDING Wrote: आप कहानी की पृष्ठभूमि को तैयार अच्छा किया है। खास तौर पर साधु बाबा का आशीर्वाद (या श्राप?) का angle भी काफी अच्छा था।।Thank you so much... Jo kuch bhi aapko suspense lag raha hai uske alwa bhi bahut cheejen aisi hai jinhe aap normal maan kr chal rahe hai.. lekin wo is kahaani ke mul aadhaar hai aur abhi tak thay bane huye hai..Is liye aao sabhi readers se yahi kahunga... Ki is kahaani ko sirf sex ke nazariye se nhi dekh kr iske suspense ko bhi samjhne ka pryaas zarur karen...
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[b]द मैजिक मिरर (THE MAGIC MIRROR) {A Tale of Tilism}[/b]
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Hawas ka ghulam
https://xossipy.com/thread-33284-post-27...pid2738750
https://xossipy.com/thread-1515.html
[b]द मैजिक मिरर (THE MAGIC MIRROR) {A Tale of Tilism}[/b]
https://xossipy.com/thread-2651.html
Hawas ka ghulam
https://xossipy.com/thread-33284-post-27...pid2738750