Adultery A husband's mistake

[rahulishere]

Flow is good, But point here is Sukanya is not pleasured fully, There is a huge scope still left in the story, Sukanya should be enjoyed fully and in the process focus should be on giving her more sexual pleasure, so that she can also enjoy it and have no regrets while cheating her foolish husband. There is also a prospect of group sex and Sukanya can get maximum pleasure in it.Explore more ways to give sexual pleasure to Sukanya which her foolish husband fail to give, I have an opinion that the ending of this story should be such a disaster for Sukanya and her husband that how some foolish actions of her husband result in eventual debauchery of Sukanya and that will enhance the essence this story's title. Also happy ending of this story will be just filmsy ending and a disastrous ending for Raghav and Sukanya will be more realistic and enjoyable to read.

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