30-06-2024, 05:32 PM
Story is going well and erotic, but one thing always strikes my mind while reading is that these incidents are just an imagination of Srinu and not happened in reality. This thought makes up my mind that whatever am reading is not true which does not triggers the real feelings up.
I hope you have thought about expressing the story in different angle. Here the truth can possibly be expressed by Ganga only. So, proceeding the story from Ganga’s angle would make us believe that what exactly has happened.
Perhaps you can use Srinu to hypnotise Ganga and gets all the truth from her.
I hope you have thought about expressing the story in different angle. Here the truth can possibly be expressed by Ganga only. So, proceeding the story from Ganga’s angle would make us believe that what exactly has happened.
Perhaps you can use Srinu to hypnotise Ganga and gets all the truth from her.