30-06-2024, 02:57 PM
Umm....the characterization of Vimal has taken a sudden u-turn....from a late-teen / early-twenties, unsure college lad, economically dependent, who has a family and reputation to protect, into a scheming hardened criminal, who probably has blackmailed a young widow into submission and debauchery......quite unbelievable and unrealistic if you ask me.
It is the author's call at the end and I respect his thoughts and creation.....however, in my mind, this single character assassination has brought down this story to the level of, "just one among the many" that's there in this forum.
It is the author's call at the end and I respect his thoughts and creation.....however, in my mind, this single character assassination has brought down this story to the level of, "just one among the many" that's there in this forum.