30-06-2024, 07:33 AM
(28-06-2024, 12:02 PM)THE EVIL Wrote: Thanks for the comment. I agree sudha's charchter isn't everyone's type but who said she is second MC of the syory!? Even in muskan's story few people showed disinterest when i introduced a side charchter for particular buildup. The idea behind introduction of sudha's role is to give that little spark in nusrat's long forgotten lust cum submissiveness towards raghu which might have lowered post getting married to kabir.
I thought everyone will get this thing. It's quiet awkard for me to come & explain.
Thanks though, really appreciate it & don't worry this story will get its deserving end.
Totally understandable. But the reason I said that is because of how you felt as a writer about readers not showing much interest anymore and probably thought people are not interested in the story anymore. So just wanted to point out my thoughts so it might give you a hint.
But trust me when the story picks up the pace and the Raghu and Nusrat begin their secret illicit affair in her own bedroom, the story will break all records. Their steamy hot sex filled encounters will be too hot and kinky to read. I can already imagine.
Waiting eagerly for the next update.