26-06-2024, 02:37 PM
(26-06-2024, 11:29 AM)THE EVIL Wrote: Important
So guys, recently i have been noticing decline in replies, likes & even views which makes me think if readers have lost intrest in this story? I'm not hungry for views & likes but replies is something i always lookup to whenever i post updates & unfortunately readers response recently has been too dull for my liking.
I don't know the solution but either i post only one update per week or just discontinue story altogether because i dont wanna continue it without people showing little to no intrest at all.
Recently maine notice kiya hai ke likes, replies aur views kafi kam arhe hain kya main iska matlab ye samjhu ke logon ko is story men koi interest nahi raha? Mujhe views aur likes ki bhuk nahi hai lekin replies ka mujhe besabri se intizar rehta hai ke logon ka kya response rehta hai mere har post ke bad.
Ab iska samadhan ya to main har hafte sirf ek hi update dun ya fir story band hi kar dun kyunke main story ko logon ke intrest dikhaye bina continue karna nahi chahta.
I’ll give you my honest review as I am someone who loves your writing and regard you as the top writer on this forum.
When I first started reading this story it made me crazy and I couldn’t stop reading it over and over again. Just the way you wrote the expression of Nusrat when she saw her old tormentor Raghu chacha after so many years. Up until the last update when Raghu chacha almost had her under her control. It was so kinky and felt like I’m watching a movie.
But then I started to sense that the story is going to be involving other characters so early in the story which will make Raghu and Nusrat’s encounters mix with others - like her neighbour aunty which is not my favourite part.
There are so many good stories end up losing its original plot when the main character, Raghu in this story, will be fucking her neighbour and she will just look and masturbate.
For example there was Akmas story - a hot housewife and bahu ends up gets fucked by watchman and plumber but then the writer for no reason involved her old 50 year old sass and the next two months it was all about sass and watchman while Akmas just watches them and masturbates.
I just don’t think when an old horny man has a young beautiful lady to use and all he’s interested in fucking an old lady with no chemistry whatsoever.
Another story Aslam ki Rand Dr Kamya was such a huge success because it was just about Aslam and Kamya. ASLAM fucked her in every update and readers loved it. That’s because the main focus was always on Kamya and Aslam was only interested to fuck her and make her his rand.
Of course other characters can be added in the story for a little cocktail but before the readers actually get to see the full chemistry between the two main characters, the other character hijacks the whole story in its early stages.
When you say people are not replying, I believe that’s because they are only interested in Nusrat and Raghu. I’m not getting any kinks seeing Raghu and Sudha Aunty. They can of course come later in the story but what I’ve thought this story to be and where I’m seeing it’s headed kind of loses interest.
I don’t know if you have seen Japanese Jav porn but they are the epitome of kinkiness and horniness. It’s mostly about cheating wife and old man young girl kind of theme and only focus on two characters. The evil guy keeps coming back to house to fulfils his lust and the girl eventually gives up and becomes his whore to use any way he wants.
Please forgive me if I’ve upset you with my review. Of course you’re the brain behind this hottest story and maybe you know what we don’t know and you may prove us all wrong by giving a whole different kinky surprise updates in the future.
Please don’t close this story. It’s the best story I’ve ever red. Please consider my thoughts and disregard if you find this nonsense.
From your honest reader.
Regards.