24-06-2024, 12:30 PM
Wow! Wow!
It’s worth waiting for long. The way you have turns the situation into eroticism is really commendable. It’s not easy to pen down the thoughts and present in this manner. Articulation of thoughts is always a challenge for every individual and for writers it’s more tough as they are blind sided with the type of audience. I guess that’s where you scored.
Another great piece is narrating the mental state of sexual arousal of Meera (the scene while taking bath) and the way you described is just awesome. Thanks for the entertainment and keep serving the eroticism and we as a reader will absorb & cherish!!
Keep going!!
It’s worth waiting for long. The way you have turns the situation into eroticism is really commendable. It’s not easy to pen down the thoughts and present in this manner. Articulation of thoughts is always a challenge for every individual and for writers it’s more tough as they are blind sided with the type of audience. I guess that’s where you scored.
Another great piece is narrating the mental state of sexual arousal of Meera (the scene while taking bath) and the way you described is just awesome. Thanks for the entertainment and keep serving the eroticism and we as a reader will absorb & cherish!!
Keep going!!