Misc. Erotica CHAMPA - EK AURAT YA KHILAUNA

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Excellent update BHUKHALUND

Story is going in different direction without involving manu and champa now. kanhaya is taking over the total story now but i dont know i have still some want feeling for manu as he is involved in story from first. but very good story we will see what happening next now in it.

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VKF

Absolutely agree vkf, this story is now losing the original plot completely.   All the emotions built up by Champa and Manu, their involvement in the plot are gone... It's just becoming Kanhaiya's story now...

The story started as Champa's saga but Manu was always the main protogonist.... Now... Champa rearly gets a mention and Manu has been treated so bad... almost with a vengence as if BL wants to punish him.... Fine Manu made mistakes, neeeds to make amends, but his is being treated unfairly... too harshly...   

Everyone in his past has been pushed away from him.... And a carrot of new relations given....   How can Manu stay relevant in this story if all the cenntral characters from his past are pushed out of his life???? He is being pushed out of the story... I think thats what BL will finally achieve.... Making a mockery of Manu.... And in doing so, making a mockery of Champa..... She is his mother afterall... Whether or not she approves of Manu....

Also the way Kanhaiya character has been built up.... He is like a god now....  Nobody is that good... everyone has grey shades.... but not Kanhaiya.... LOL... And the way he wants to take away everything from Manu.... Wont be surprised if he and the old coot (bade guruji) actually kick him out of kalibari trust.... As is he has taken every person that Manu ever had in his life...

Well lets see what further BL can conjour up.... Have followed this saga from the start .... will see it to its conclusion....  But dissapointed.... really really disappointed how this story is turning out..... Its becoming too toxic...