Misc. Erotica CHAMPA - EK AURAT YA KHILAUNA

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Interesting update…. Finally, Manu and Suchi get together…. Would have been good if there was a bit more conversation, some more feelings, but a good start nevertheless. Nice

But BL, still … why would an alpha male like Manu be cuckold himself? One definition of a cuckold is a male who willingly accepts another male breeding his female….. I mean this is a guy who, rightly or wrongly punished Bade
Pandit and Raghav because they made a play for his girls… that’s who Manu is.. He reacts violently when his girls are threatened or taken against his wish…. It makes no sense if he just accepts getting his wife bred by others…   Absolutely no sense…. Whether he loves his wives or not, his personal trait won’t allow him to just fold his hand ….. That’s just not the Manu we know)

Yes, we agree that Mithoo has no place in his life anymore….  So he should divorce her… get her out of his life….

I hope that Suhana won’t succumb to Kanhaiya’s charms

And though Suchi has now turned, I really wish that she and Manu can still have a relationship which, finally develops into love… I really wish that Suchi should only have Manu’s children…. Given that of all his old Loves (His women), she is the only one who still cares for him...

Also, what's with Priyanka?   She told Pari she will shift into the Ashram soon.... Is she planning to marry Kanhaiya or is she still pining away for Manu?

Kanhaiya is looking like a classical Villain (If Manu and Champa are still the Hero and Heroine of this story) …. Deciding who Manu should be together with and who won’t be with him….  Will his arrogance (Ahankar) go unpunished … or is the old coot (Bade Guruji) so enamored with him, that he gets away with everything….

Nobodys perfect…. Everyone has a grey shade…. But in your portrayal, Kanhaiya is God…

I look forward to your future updates….


NIK