16-06-2024, 10:50 AM
Hi kk007007,
You made to read, then read again and again. Awesome narration by the way.
You ought to have more twists and turts. Waiting for that surprise this story beholds in it.
I restrained myself from coming to any conclusions, waiting for the things to unfold.
You made to read, then read again and again. Awesome narration by the way.
You ought to have more twists and turts. Waiting for that surprise this story beholds in it.
I restrained myself from coming to any conclusions, waiting for the things to unfold.
-Pickup, drop, escape.