Adultery That Resort Trip

[madiha.agarwal]

Nice going Madiha... But your updates are too short. I as a reader get engaged with first few paragraphs but then it abdrubtly ends.

I suggest don't be in a hurry to post an update, take your time build the premise and try engaging the reader with some thrill and suspense.

Your plot is great... Just try to get a little depth in your characters that way your story will become more interesting.

Keep going... All the best.

Thanks Suraj... I just wanted to tease the readers into what might happen next .. once I get into the main part, it will be bigger ...