10-06-2024, 11:09 AM
Hello bookkeeper,
The old plot was good, glad that you are returning back to the originality. but dont add sex scene as it will kill the interest ln the story. Also slow phase of the story will increase the story readers. After sex sex there will be nothing to continue.
The old plot was good, glad that you are returning back to the originality. but dont add sex scene as it will kill the interest ln the story. Also slow phase of the story will increase the story readers. After sex sex there will be nothing to continue.