Adultery Heavenly angel: deceived by trust by duckhunter
Hey everyone,

Thanks for everyone's continuous support and feedback.

I see everybody's critic and suggestions here and thankful for expressing it frankly. From what I see, half of the audience enjoy how the story is going with added flavour in it. The problem was when I was trying to progress the story with original characters, most of them felt that it is slow and there is no sex in it and despite story completing more than 50 chapters.

My original intention was not writing just another sex story. I wanted to keep it slow and progress with the daily incidents of the teacher and how 3 students try to mingle with her, get closer and develops a competition among them to become physically intimate with her.

But when opinions poured regarding lack of sex, thats when i started to deviate from original idea and started introducing new characters and make her exposed. And the easiest way to do that is through may be blackmailing and drugs or playing innocent. Thus still keeping Devika's character still morally good to do justice to her angelic character.

But I understand now that , the original fans of this story was not pleased with it. I totally get it.

So what im planning now is bring this story to final stages and will try to make every supporter of this story happy by bringing back old characters. And those who wants to see sex also will not be disappointed

Thanks for all the feedback,

Bookkeeper
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RE: Heavenly angel: deceived by trust by duckhunter - by Bookkeeper - 10-06-2024, 07:44 AM
RE: Heavenly angel: deceived by trust - by bigman - 06-12-2018, 12:21 AM
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