11-09-2023, 09:54 AM
(11-09-2023, 09:45 AM)RCF Wrote: You are writing it so well..Do not change the slow seduction thinking of some views. Your story title should be justified and it will be only justified if she crosses the line at the end or when she is desperate else it would seem like silly.
Avunu story chala slow ga seducing ga unte ne baguntudhi. Nenu Nidhi aunty amayakathvam inka Geetha dhatena ee two stories mathram chadavatanike ee site loniki vosthunnanu. E two stories lo mathrame slow ga inka seducing line tho unnai.