09-06-2024, 03:59 PM
(05-06-2024, 02:55 AM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: Hi Rahul,
First of all you are among few authors who is really committed to the story. With regular updates and through responses you are winning hearts. Keep it up bro.
Initially thought of waiting till next update, as Sukanya is going to open the door, without knowing what will happen next I should not comment.
But few things I have to share, your best updates are meena and Sharat's play before Sukanya, then the first theater blowjob with a stranger, ragavhan sending Sukanya to terrace with bedsheet, and raghavan exhibiting Sukanya unknowingly to Vimal at the balcony. In all these incidents Either Raghavan or meena were present, so dont sideline them.
Also I agree with @wackthu @me.you and @dhanapal. They have a point. But if you continue with husband out of town and Vimal saga, by few calls to ragahavan Sukanya will elope with Vimal. Or ragahavan will witness Vimal banging Sukanya at her marital bed. And what @3sivaram said will happen.
You developed this story in such a way that it has scope to evolve into something bigger, don't stick to Vimal, I know he is your favourite.
You are the captain of the ship, you know better than us, your decision is final. Waiting for next update.
Appreciate your inputs bro. I wish I had more time, but unfortunately I have very less time to write. I still try to use every spare minute. Just believe that this is not a routine adultery love story.