Adultery Heavenly angel: deceived by trust by duckhunter

[Gojo 6eyes]

Bookkeeper,
As I always said your individual updates are always great but they never add up to the story.
For example, look at "cheating wife?" story, he established just 4 characters and just one incident and completely focussed on unfolding that incident by adding a lot of emotions, look at the replies on the story he won't find anyone commenting to make the female lead a bitch but are focussed on how the story is going unfold.

Now coming to this story, this is also pretty similar earlier as the story is about how devika's life is gonna change after meeting the students.Everyone wants to read how that is going happen and also the earlier chapters took a lot of time in  establishing characters, so the readers can have pretty good idea about how characters react to a situation.That's why this is very popular compared to any other stories, cause in this story people gonna care about the characters emotions.I don't know from where you took over the story.But you heavily focussed on creating a situation rather than thinking about how the already established characters will react to those situation it made all that development went in vain.For example take any of your plot either blackmail,drugs or WhatsApp group worker, you don't need all those chapters of character development to write those plots, and also it completely changed the perspective of readers towards devika(just compare old and present comments).
     At end what I am saying is you are a excellent writer but you solely focussing on creating situations rather than thinking how these well established characters will react to it, which is hindering both the characters(mainly devika) and story progression.
       Just read this story from start by yourself, you will understand what I am saying.
Most of the people reading now already forgot about plot, so they just judge every update based on how existing or sensual it is.
       So it's upto you how you want to progress this story.
Either try to tell a great story or just satisfy the readers giving sensual updates.
         ALL THE BEST