07-06-2024, 03:57 PM
(07-06-2024, 03:05 PM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: Hi madiha,
I like your casting of the characters, you have one from every R.....on. Are Priya-mathew interfaith? Then thumbs-up. Thats how friends are made. Realistic. This suggests that we are from same part of the country..
Premise is promising, keep it simple, keep it relatable. Tease the readers, Don't introduce an Alpha male and extreme cuckoldry . Keep posting.
My story is more on exploring how supposedly happy wife cheat . Priya and Matthew met on tinder so they are the last to look at caste/religion.. i didn't want any religion based fetishes but just about group of IT workers who ended as friends