Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.

[maharsha25]

Sorry for your disappointment bro...But I think you have skipped a major portion of the story here or you were unable to understand it.... in any case you shouldn't call someone's story cheap just because it is not according to your taste. To any reader who has read the story your comment makes no sense. Shipra has not submitted to anyone. 

Have a little patience bro... According to your comment Shipra has already submitted to the young kid Alok and had sex with her. It is going to be a long story with lots of twist & turns and if you can't keep up or want a better plotted story I suggest you  to visit sites like literotica.

Plot of my story has been clear from day 1 brother. If you can't make constructive suggestions like other readers please refrain yourself from discouraging the writer.

I would encourage you to continue with the story and not get distracted by such discouraging comments. your writing skills are pretty fine, narration and thought process extremely mature for a erotic story. We are eagerly awaiting the further part of this story which seemed elusive and shrouded in mystery, the one that occurred right after patode revealed his package. I would say this part where you managed to keep it a suspense is outrageously masterful storytelling. Good luck and thanks for taking out time to share this excellent content with us.