07-06-2024, 03:05 PM
(This post was last modified: 07-06-2024, 03:10 PM by Hornytamilan23. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Hi madiha,
I like your casting of the characters, you have one from every R.....on. Are Priya-mathew interfaith? Then thumbs-up. Thats how friends are made. Realistic. This suggests that we are from same part of the country..
Premise is promising, keep it simple, keep it relatable. Tease the readers, Don't introduce an Alpha male and extreme cuckoldry . Keep posting.
I like your casting of the characters, you have one from every R.....on. Are Priya-mathew interfaith? Then thumbs-up. Thats how friends are made. Realistic. This suggests that we are from same part of the country..
Premise is promising, keep it simple, keep it relatable. Tease the readers, Don't introduce an Alpha male and extreme cuckoldry . Keep posting.
-Pickup, drop, escape.