Misc. Erotica CHAMPA - EK AURAT YA KHILAUNA

[bhukhalund]

Sorry Bhukaland,,, I will call you BL.. please don’t mind

The whole thing started with you portraying Manu as a papi insaan…   I don’t recall the update, but that is when most of your readers left…

Bro for all of us who followed this epic story… EPIC STORY… It was never the story of Champa… it was always the story of Champa and Manu and all others in their lives….  CHAMPA AND MANU…. And others in their lives ….. I repeat CHAMPA AND MANU and others in their lives...

I have been following this epic since day one… When it was posted in English forum… then transferred to Hindi…

If you Want to end it, please do, but don’t make it a Kanahiya triumph….

Infact you have a very good opportunity to create this into a thriller.   A chance to get Manu make a comeback with a bang……. Or at least end it in the right way….. A chace to end it with how it started... With Champa and Manu....

Bro refer to my earlier post…

Tumne Dil aur Dhadkan ko alag kiya hai….. Get them together… This story will be salvaged….

Infact you can have a chance to create a thriller…. A few fast paced episodes…. A fight between a guy with powers vs a common man.... A fight between a Plain Vanilla guy vs a typhoon... think ...


Also you have a chance THE START THE NEXT SERIES OR TEASER FOR THE NEXT SERIES….

CHAMPA… THE NEXT GENERATION

But its your story…. Continue it or end it your way….

Nik

Thanks a lot dear . I really liked you free and frank observation  . But I am not agreeing with few things you said . First , I only stated that Manu did some thing which he should not have done . All readers will agree that when Nargis herself has submitted fully to Manu there was no need for him to make Uday suck his cock . Koyali was fucked by Manu but again he punished guru jee for fucking Kiyali . Similarly Seth hee and Altaaf fucked Saumya but he did not punish them whereas he made Raghav such his cock only because he had squeezed Saumya’s hips . 

Secondly, Champa time and again said to everyone that she can get satisfied only by Manu . She is always ready to fuck with Manu but here again he has kept a distance from Champa . Mansi wants him , Manjari is ready to forgive him but he has stopped going to Mansi’s house . Champa has her own reasons & believe to stay with Mansi . I have never portrayed Manu as a papi . 

As per his nature Manu always wants new maals . So he is getting . Vidya , Mridula’s maid etc and Mayuri is mad for him . 

Hero & heroin of this story will continue to be Manu & Champa only . Like every ones life small setback has come in Manu’s life . Except few every one in this story has changed . Kanhaiya is fucking only those whom Manu does not want to fuck now . Kanhaiya is not a competitor of Manu . You will read that Padma has also forgiven Manu and taken him inside her . Suchi is a fun loving woman. Since Manu has started neglecting 
Suchi and Miththu, both has found their men in Kanhaiya. 

You have read that except Champa , each and every character of this story has been punished so Manu will also get some punishment but believe me both DIL & DHADKAN will unite together. Thanks , keep reading.