Adultery The Rural Posting: Shipra's ordeal.

[Dark Horse]

Starting was stunned but when u included two young kids and with them by u made a erotic scene then your story is so cheap. I don't know which perspectively you did it but it's completely so ridiculous. I hope you will not includ that's kids with our's heroine. Because u created a strong woman character and now u are using her cheaply. It's disappointed matter. You had submissived her so early and what about her boss? Man, firstly you should be plotted your story properly and later then you will write it.