Adultery Anita Singh - Story of a Seductive Housewife

[mike_kite56]

Thanks a lot for the critical feedback. Can you tell me where have I mentioned that I am a professional writer and can write the story in the best way possible? Is writing on Xossipy my profession? Anyway, would like to learn the art of story writing from you, not in a complete professional manner, but even little bit of how professionals write. Can you please teach me?

Listen Bro.. Move the story forward. Your story is not moving towards any conclusion .. it is becoming like a jalebi.. revolving in the same place. Anita's encounters should be diversified. After reading all these updates for months.. we are not reaching into any conclusion.. I have lost patience. I don't know how other people are loving this. Are you replying through your other fake accounts? Just Asking!