03-06-2024, 11:21 AM
Those who know even a little bit about story writing will be able to tell that this story is professionally boring. Since beginning there are only 2 main characters. And the story progresses like "USNE USE DEKHA, USNE USE DEKHTE HUE DEKHA, USNE USE DEKHTE HUE DEKHA TOH DONO NE EK DUSRE KO DEKHTE HUE DEKHA". Whatever may be the genre, story writing fundamentals should be followed.