Adultery Heavenly angel: deceived by trust by duckhunter

[Bookkeeper]

Earlier parts of story genuinely given me a great novel type vibes,you should have continued with that love, romance and ended by one or more students winning her through love it would have been a great binge read and would have been different from most of the stories on this site.
You could have started another thread for situational based story rather than turning this into one.
Tbh at this point it feels like your just slapping random stories to continue this story.
See now many readers doesn't even care about devika's feelings in her story.You turned a great story into every other story on this site where a female lead is just a sex doll ready to be used.
The soul of story is already lost.Really disappointed bookkeeper bro how you went from great story teller to another random writer on this site.
Anyway best of luck bro.If you write another story just go with genuine story telling and don't turn it into situational based story.

The thing is when I started writing I had lots of time and i had no plans to end the story. I kept writing took it very slow. And there were people saying there is no action in the story, its just nothing happening. So i changed my approach and then i stopped having enough time to write. So whenever I write, i try to mix some action without entirely loosing the original plot. Thats why for some the story started to feel stupid with no logic.

At this of time,  I wanted bring this to end without loosing the essence and move on