29-05-2024, 04:05 PM
(29-05-2024, 01:42 PM)arvind274 Wrote: Nice update pr bhai aapn dabal pentrction itne jaldi krwa diya story me jaishe aanchl ki roj dabal lund ki haibit ho chuki ho y gand me achha bda hol ho gya ho ki uske kuch bhi dal do fark hi na padna ho. Bhai pahle aanchl ko na nukur krna tha fir dheere dheere taiyar hona tha tb uska alg maza aata. Aisha lg rha ki jaishe y part aap jaldbazi me likhe ho aur itna din rat chudne ke bad aanchl pati k ghar me hote hue bhi land lene chali gyi yr thoda pati ka bhi dar aur rispect rahne do story me bhai
mere mind me 2-3 plots hain, mai is story ko thoda alag roop dene wala hoon, but Anchal ka character kahi se boring nahi hone dunga