Misc. Erotica Sarala teacher deceived by trust and innocence
(27-05-2024, 09:13 AM)Haran000 Wrote: Good update but sarala having problem with sperms is illogical, even if we consider fantasy it's illogical. Ok leave it for story sake. Bro please consider few basic logics in story next time. Because even to an innocent we can't say opposite of basic biology. You should have put it as PCOD problem and the solution is to indulge in foreplay as an innocent Vishnu would believe that as a remedy.

You're ploting is on point just go on. 

I'm also writing a story, don't take my comments as negative, it's like saying everything shouldn't be for story sake, even though it's a fantasy. Take my comments as criticism. 

Sure bro, no harm in suggestions... But the point what I was trying to prove is.... You need to think from Sarala perspective and she believes Vishnu to be innocent hence she is doing all this to help him... So when Sarala believes a kid like Vishnu is innocent so obviously her thinkings will be ..to tell something illogical as she believes Vishnu would believe blindly whatever her teacher says ...so actually Sarala is taking the advantage of Vishnu by giving some stupid reason....and also there is a reason why Vishnu believed this stupid sperm problem...and that is the twist in the coming episode..so please read and  hopefully you might understand the reason why i used that excuse...
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RE: Sarala teacher deceived by trust and innocence - by Vishnu1 - 27-05-2024, 01:57 PM



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