[Haran000]

Good update but sarala having problem with sperms is illogical, even if we consider fantasy it's illogical. Ok leave it for story sake. Bro please consider few basic logics in story next time. Because even to an innocent we can't say opposite of basic biology. You should have put it as PCOD problem and the solution is to indulge in foreplay as an innocent Vishnu would believe that as a remedy.

You're ploting is on point just go on. 

I'm also writing a story, don't take my comments as negative, it's like saying everything shouldn't be for story sake, even though it's a fantasy. Take my comments as criticism.