26-05-2024, 04:21 PM
(25-05-2024, 11:45 AM)me.you Wrote: Hi, I hate to provide story line suggestion. But this one came in to mind. when sukanya called Raghav to ask for permission to go out with meena and vimal, the same time, Raghav was planning to come home. so he did not answer. once he reached home, he saw these three are going out. so he follow them as shadow. when he saw sukanya BJ to rahul, he is shocked and heartbroken. he came out of the theatre. he was in dilemme. he did not think in immediate anger. He took his time, and he realized that initially, Sukanya was shy wife, he was the one who made her like this. So he is thinking about how to get his wife back.
Here, u can choose your own way. Make Raghav's mind changes and be happy with sukanya, even if she fuck with others. Or else play in strategical way. Tell her he made some mistakes or his friends made some mistakes. so it will ruin their life, so he is upset for that. thats why he did not answer the call. or else he can tell her what he saw in the theater, and its all because of his mitakes, and make a good end card to this story or make some adventure include Meena.
There is a english story name " wife girlfrined for rich man". initally wife need some money to gift husband. she is willing to a richman gf for a day. but unfortunately, she was tricked and fucked by many mens in same day with husbands knkowledge. he cant do anythink on that time. finally husband will get a chance to fuck her wife frined. He also fantasizes about that wife friend. But he refused in finally. it was an awesome story.
Please make this story better. Give some logical or different way of telling a story. Dont use it as usual cheating or cuckold type. Already, this story is becoming a different kind of story. Please follow that. One more think... do not try to drag the story. if story needs an end, put an end to it. start a new story.. Dont drag. If you drag the story, then it will be spoiled food.
Thank you for taking time out to share your ideas bro. Please share the link of the story you are referring to.