Adultery A husband's mistake

[Hornytamilan23]

Hi Rahul,
I like the idea behind your update. Its like you take a erotic scenario and do the detailing around it to make it acceptable. Here your idea is birthday bash and getting drunk. But You keep repeating Some scenarios like truth or dare, without inner, and vimal using her gulit to feast on her. One thing I should mention, you are not leaving loose ends, she deleted the pictures, her parents are away, keeping meena in the story and developing the plot around her. I can say there are some mistakes in this part. I also find it vague to correct after you hit the button. But you can still edit after posting to avoid mistakes, as it halts the flow for the readers.