Adultery Heavenly angel: deceived by trust by duckhunter

[Bookkeeper]

I don't understand why people have to so negative in their comments.
If you don't like a story don't read it.
Or if you like it a little but want the author to write better or write in a way you want, then request the author politely.
Why be rude to the author and his writing?

Everyone just commenting should remember that they haven't accopmplished anything in life/career/hobby enough to call someone's effort stupid and clumsy. Before using such words, imagine someone calling you and your life a failure. I am should you would feel angry enough to punch them.
Reading stories here is a privilege not your birth right.