Adultery Heavenly angel: deceived by trust by duckhunter

[Younus1999]

This story took time to establish the characters and their intentions and had one of the best progression in the earlier parts of story later the writer kept repeating the story by adding new characters and them groping her and change location add another new character and grope her.If we don't tell him it's repetitive and just praise him he will think audience are enjoying the story and repeat the same thing.The story should be about devika and one of the main characters getting close to her and fuck her,but the story is not going in that direction.
Not being negative but thats just my opinion