12-05-2024, 01:27 PM
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(12-05-2024, 10:20 AM)jobut Wrote: could you make the story with matured old men to be more realistic and out of the bank staff?
Buddy I think the story so far is quite realistic. Adding old men to the narration will unnecessary disrupt the story line. Please keep reading I think you'll not be disappointed.
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