12-05-2024, 10:17 AM
(10-05-2024, 04:40 PM)SweetSonali Wrote: Excellent and beautiful start
(10-05-2024, 04:55 PM)Nadia Qureshi Wrote: Superb, stunning and thrilling start.
(10-05-2024, 05:12 PM)The King of Devils Wrote: Absolutely great and awesome start
(10-05-2024, 05:15 PM)Sabitri Roy Wrote: Bahut hi mast aur behad hi shandaar shuruwat
(10-05-2024, 05:25 PM)Armando Wrote: bahut badiya start.bahut hi mast story.
(10-05-2024, 05:32 PM)Asad Pong Pong Wrote: ekdum kamaal ka shuruwat
(10-05-2024, 05:38 PM)Bambi Wrote: ashadaran start,awesome story,amazing writings!
(10-05-2024, 05:42 PM)BhaiyakaLadli Wrote: bahut badiya shuruwat,ekdum fataka story,awesome and amazing writings!
(10-05-2024, 05:55 PM)BIMBO Wrote: wah!wah!wah! ekdum kamaal hai yaar buss ekdum kamaal ka start! Hats off
(10-05-2024, 06:09 PM)Anvesharonny Wrote: Fabulous Start,Raghu ke double meaning dialogue toh jabardast the,aahe kya hota hain dekhna interesting hoga.
Finally legendary writer back on this forum.Welcome Back.
(10-05-2024, 06:10 PM)Anvesharonny Wrote: Brother ignore the noise and just write what you love to write.
(10-05-2024, 07:06 PM)Barbie Doll Wrote: bahut badiya ek zabardast aur mast kahaani!
(10-05-2024, 07:18 PM)Voyonkor Bishu Wrote: Beautiful story! Very nice and spicy writings!
(10-05-2024, 07:26 PM)Vito Corleone Wrote: congrats for new thread.
(10-05-2024, 07:47 PM)Mafiadon Wrote: Only fucking scenes can't make an adult story specially interfaith adult story extremely hot and erotic. The elements that make it extremely hot and erotic are good plots, excellent themes, suitable characters setting,related situation narrations, making different situations and the most important elements are erotic, exciting and double meaning naughty conversations among the characters. I know it very well that you are the master of eroticism in this field. And I heartily request you to apply more such kinds of above mentioned elements in this great story.
(10-05-2024, 07:59 PM)Mafiadon Wrote: Beautiful and excellent story. When so sweet, so cute, so sanskari, so pakiza, so faithful, so loving, so innocent, so religious and so conservative a wife, a mom or a sister is seduced and fucked by a low class house servant or a watchman or a janitor or a hardcore criminal type of man of opposite majab and compels her to become his personal whore and turns her into a rand, it makes an interfaith adult story extremely hot, exciting, enjoyable ,pleasant, pleasurable and super erotic because extreme and insatiable sexual thirsts, desires and randipana are concealed inside every such kind of above mentioned female and it needs a perverted and evil minded man of extreme sexual prowess who has got a monster dick to bring out her randipana.
(10-05-2024, 08:15 PM)Olivia. Wrote: Great start
(10-05-2024, 08:56 PM)Fahima Wrote: Bahut bahut shandaar aur lajawab shuruwat
Thanks
My work
1. Koel, ek masoom housewife
2. Bade ghar ki bahu betiyan
3. Game of lust
4. Kahani ek bade ghar ki
5. Muskan
6. Tale of a lustful revenge
1. Koel, ek masoom housewife
2. Bade ghar ki bahu betiyan
3. Game of lust
4. Kahani ek bade ghar ki
5. Muskan
6. Tale of a lustful revenge