Adultery A husband's mistake

[rahulishere]

Hi bro,
I wanted to discuss this in private.

But i prefer xossipy more than literotica because of this comment feature. We can easily share our thoughts with authors and fellow xossipians.

So I am going to share in comments section.

Do u really believe that you can write an Erotica, which can be really close to reality?
Can you ever justify adultery?
I really don't know how many husband's can digest the fact that her wife swallowed a strangers semen at a public place?
And do you really think this plot of married women being a college boys girlfriend is new to xossipy, read Nandhinii Aryans thread in tamil section?
You are taking this story at very slow rate, do you think at this rate will you be able to complete the story by any means?
What about the parents, siblings, family of Raghav and Sukanya?
Why they are not planning about childrens?
What about the sheer pressure you get from our society being not able to conceive?
And after all these debauchery, do you think couples cab lead a normal life there after?
What about the mental trauma they have carry to their grave?
When Sukanya is making all the moves? What happened to Raghav and meena angle?
After all Raghav is not a cuck, so why can't he have his fun?
Why Raghav is suddenly feeling guilty or jealous about what Sukanya is doing? 
Isn't he wanted Sukanya to get bolder, so he can have fun? Isn't raghav a bad boy? 
Why this sudden transformation in him?

One thing cheating is not that easy, in reality there will be lot if inner struggle, you can never be a caring wife while cheating, after years of relationship, partner will easily find out this.

Rahul will understand, purusana yum paakanum, mattavanukku pundaiyum virikaanum na epdi bro. Rusi Kand poonai summa vidadu nu solra mari, pundaiya virucha kadasi vara elattukum virikka vendiyadhu dhan. 


And many more logical questions can be asked, if this happens in reality. 

But if this is fiction or fantasy, then anything is possible. 


As I have said this many times before, and I will say this again,

Keep the plot simple, write for the readers satisfaction, write fictional story with a pinch of reality, and you will be a hit.

Even Legends Such as Krish, mouni, seenufromdubai, failed to satisfy all sections of readers. 

Thanks Rahul for keeping me hooked.

Hi bro,

I see you took a lot of time to write it. You said that you wanted to discuss in private, but put up a huge message here. Let's lose the pretention here. You wanted to prove you are smart. I have no issues with that. And I have answers for all your questions, but I don't want to waste my time here as I know you are prejudiced.

Also I have categorically mentioned that this story will be written in my style which caters to a specific set of readers. If you don't fall in that category, you are free to find some other story that will delight you. Maybe you can write one if you are satisfied with the writers.