06-05-2024, 07:29 PM
(06-05-2024, 04:47 PM)Hornytamilan23 Wrote: Hi Rahul,
Honestly Bro the update on what happened at the theater was your best so far. But after that I felt you are strecthing the plot unnecessarily. I thought initially this story had more scope, but lately the space at which the story is moving, it is kind of boring.
Also when you do complete this story, and I am sure readers will skip Many updates to get to their favourite part. Also except when Sharat was pounding meena in her ass, your otther sex scenes are too short. I said this before too much of this seduction, foreplay, teasing will make the plot complicated. You have given more than a dozen of updates, but your story is still underdeveloped and in the first act.
I am not criticising, but now you have started asking suggestions from the readers, i am disppointed that you have not planned anything how take this story forward.
I really love this plot, so dont spoil it. Best of luck bro.
Thank you for your honest inputs brother. I can understand your expectation, but the story moves forward in a justified way. A woman who was traditionally brought up that she even hesitated to expose herself to her own husband cannot become a whore in one night. The transformation should be justified.
Also I have not asked for suggestion. I was just judging the reader's mindset. Also trying to add some fun in the meantime with some questions. My updates are not at all influenced by the readers although I respect all your opinions.
Even the upcoming update is not at all influenced.