Adultery A husband's mistake

[Hornytamilan23]

Hi Rahul,

Honestly Bro the update on what happened at the theater was your best so far. But after that I felt you are strecthing the plot unnecessarily. I thought initially this story had more scope, but lately the space at which the story is moving, it is kind of boring.

Also when you do complete this story, and I am sure readers will skip Many updates to get to their favourite part. Also except when Sharat was pounding meena in her ass, your otther sex scenes are too short. I said this before too much of this seduction, foreplay, teasing will make the plot complicated. You have given more than a dozen of updates, but your story is still underdeveloped and in the first act.

I am not criticising, but now you have started asking suggestions from the readers, i am disppointed that you have not planned anything how take this story forward.

I really love this plot, so dont spoil it. Best of luck bro.