05-05-2024, 07:29 PM
(03-05-2024, 08:44 AM)Rowdybaby Wrote: Ignore these feedbacks! These are characters created by you. You can write whatever you want! Your story is great just keep going
(04-05-2024, 05:00 AM)Gandhi krishna Wrote: Wonderful update. Suma should marry Gunda and all should live together.
(04-05-2024, 05:46 AM)muqtadirnaqvi Wrote: Thanks for inviting suggestions. I see including another man is too early. It can fit in later stage after the beggar had thoroughly used Priyanka's body in anyway he likes. You know the beggar intends to shave her pubes. let him get that. Let the baby Priyanka move between her farm house and beggar's hut naked.
Thanks for feedback