Adultery Heavenly angel: deceived by trust by duckhunter
Bro this is my last comment as i already lost interest in this story.I just want to tell the writer a few points which made me lose interest on this story,i think a silent majority of audience will feel the same.
1.Addition of ramu and making Rahim a villian,that destroyed Rahim character,he went from getting jealous of chaami to allowing ramu to have sex scene with her, completely abondoning his best friends,for me if Rahim would have made that sex scene with Vishnu whom she trusts the most,it would have helped story progress without making Rahim a villian.
2.Kabaddi was a great plot,but if Rahim would have asked devika to help him in practicing,she would have helped as she treats him as her little brother,where Rahim would have taken advantage without her thinking bad him as it was a contact sport.
3.Addition of new characters a lot and them doing more than what the main characters have done whom she actually trust,it destroys devika as a character.You can compare the comments of the recent chapters to older ones.In older ones audience loved and emotionally connected to devika,but in recent chapters comments all the audience saying she should get fucked by the three guys which clearly shows that now they don't care about devika,all they want is sex session which shows all the character development of devika throughout story is just nullified.
4.I hope you realise that and continue the further story more on development of chemistry between devika and main leads which is very important in long stories for example like in "Dhika an innocent angel" story.
5.Pls stop adding new characters and concentrate on how building the romance between the main characters.
Guys if you are feeling the same pls comment and tell the writer before it's too late
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RE: Heavenly angel: deceived by trust by duckhunter - by Younus1999 - 02-05-2024, 08:56 AM
RE: Heavenly angel: deceived by trust - by bigman - 06-12-2018, 12:21 AM
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