[Suraj76626]

First thought was "ASUSUAL" "NOTHING NEW" "SCRIPT OF INDIAN MOVIE ABOUT VILLIAN" " ANY ONE COULD HAVE GUESSED "

I agree that, for the flow of the story this chapter is important. As it establishes the conflict between the trio and the motive behind toppos actions.

But really amazed about your use of language and carefully selected words which transcends the exact emotions.

If this is your original work, then kudos. Waiting to see how you take this story forward.

A hint of surprise will be good.

Thanks man, the story is 100% original, some characters are inspired by real life people.
I am trying to add some thrills and surprises in the upcoming chapters.