30-04-2024, 11:01 AM
(This post was last modified: 30-04-2024, 11:02 AM by Hornytamilan23. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
First thought was "ASUSUAL" "NOTHING NEW" "SCRIPT OF INDIAN MOVIE ABOUT VILLIAN" " ANY ONE COULD HAVE GUESSED "
I agree that, for the flow of the story this chapter is important. As it establishes the conflict between the trio and the motive behind toppos actions.
But really amazed about your use of language and carefully selected words which transcends the exact emotions.
If this is your original work, then kudos. Waiting to see how you take this story forward.
A hint of surprise will be good.
I agree that, for the flow of the story this chapter is important. As it establishes the conflict between the trio and the motive behind toppos actions.
But really amazed about your use of language and carefully selected words which transcends the exact emotions.
If this is your original work, then kudos. Waiting to see how you take this story forward.
A hint of surprise will be good.
-Pickup, drop, escape.
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