30-04-2024, 09:26 AM
Small suggestion : Blackmail,drug effect are overused plot devices don't use them.The plot device should more like after she escaped from Rahim and ramu she should have visited temple where she meets chaami again and tells him after the thread was exposed to Rahim alot of bad things happened in her life.Then chaami takes advantage of her in the name Pooja.It would have brought a bit of nostalgia for old readers also.
You have great writing skills just make plot devices a bit natural to move story forward.
You have great writing skills just make plot devices a bit natural to move story forward.